If the redness of the red is so bright
full of emotion
beauty, life, and confusion
these elements are common to all women
to be treated the same a men in the workplace
is what a woman's goal in today's society is
to be fit and skinny like all the models
women should love who they are and embrace it
or at least embrace the man or woman they're with
cherish every waking moment with them
because you'll never know when they're gone
don't it always seem to go
but that's life hurry
I do believe that it can be too long sometimes
even though a nap is good for the soul
dancing like know one is watching can be better
sing in the shower cause no one can hear
because you have a horrible voice
I can't stand talking to you
I can't even stand to look at you
or be around you because you make me that angry
I don't mean to make you angry.
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Exquisite corpse
When I finally heard the end product I was amused. I thought the different directions the peom went was funny.
I agree that it was very amusing when Robert read it to the class. It didn't make much sense but it was a good exercise.
"Women should love who they are and embrace it" is the best quote i ran across in a while. Women should stand up and go for what they want letting go all that held them back. I embrace everything about being a woman and i love it. This Exquisite is great because so many different ideas and perceptions went into this piece and it spoke truths and made me laugh.
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